AO3 [TABLE OF CONTENT]
All the information about changes made is recorded below.
I'm keeping this chapter here, even if it's not relavent to this copy of the story because these notes to the chapters would be very useful for later edits.
art for this story:
spike: [SFW]
hunter & spike: [NSFW]
jin: [SWF]
carter: [SWF]
TABLE OF CONTENT:
Chronological list of all the chapters and the changes that have been made to
each
one
Chapter
1: rut
Edited on: 2023-03-01
There are changes done in this chapter.
Spikes POV has been rewritten to improve grammar, spelling and flow of text.
This chapter needed to be edited as it hadn't been touched since it was first written.
The changes do not change anything that happens in this chapter originally.
Chapter
2: bedridden (one)
Edited on: 2022-04-24
There are major changes done in this chapter.
It has been rewritten and extended (new scenes and changes to the old
text).
This chapter needed to be edited so we could depict the characters true to what we know them to be
now.
The changes and added scenes do not change the narrative of the story. They serve to
explain what we had previously left ambiguous.
Chapter
3: bedridden (two)
Edited on: 2022-05-04
There are major changes done in this chapter.
It has been rewritten and extended (new scenes and changes to the old
text).
This chapter needed to be edited so we could depict the characters true to what we know them to be
now.
The changes and added scenes do not change the narrative of the story. They serve to
explain what we had previously left ambiguous.
Chapter
4: first escape (bar)
Added on: 2021-12-10
this chapter was discussed and planned beforehand but was not originally written and posted along with the
others.
It doesn't change anything for the future narrative.
Chapter
5: second escape (castration)
There are major changes done in this chapter.
Spike submission scene is completely rewritten and extended.
More events added to the chapter - scenes outside and inside the cabin, through the night
and morning.
Changed the order of this chapter from 7th to 5th on: 2023-01-24
Chapter
6: second escape (2)
Added on: 2022-01-02
after we looked over the previous chapter, we decided it was too short and it desparetely needed an
extention
Changed the order of this chapter from 8th to 6th on: 2023-01-24
Chapter
7: bitch training (one)
Added on: 2022-05-23
Adding exposition about Spike's relationship with his former pack and his adjustment to his life with
Hunter.
Changed the order of this chapter from 5th to 7th on: 2023-01-24
Chapter 8:
bitch training (two)
Added on: 2022-05-23
Adding exposition about Spike's relationship with his former pack and his adjustment to his life with
Hunter.
Changed the order of this chapter from 6th to 8th on: 2023-01-24
Chapter
9: the family (the party)
No changes made.
Chapter
10: the family (2)
There are major changes done in this chapter.
Half of this chapter was edited and extended and the other half was completely
rewritten.
Would recommend rereading it since it changes a part of the foundation for the future narrative.
Chapter
11: the bar
No changes made.
Before continuing to the next chapter you can read:
1. Flint and Razor - [Chapter 1]
2. Flint and Razor - [Chapter 2]
3. Flint and Razor - [Chapter 3]
These chronologically happen before (spike's rut).
Flint's storyline doesn't affect the main story in "Hunter and Spike" but it will
give insight to the pack outside of this plotline.
If you have no interested in those characters, you can skip them.
Chapter
12: spike's rut
No changes made.
Chapter
13: rut aftercare
No changes made.
Chapter
14: the mansion (jin and james)
There are minor changes done in this chapter.
The last part of the chapter concerning James and Carter was moved and is now
part of the next chapter.
Chapter
15: aftercare (jin and james)
No changes made.
Chapter
16: wolf and lion (jin and owen)
No changes made.
Chapter
17: forest
No changes made.
Chapter
18: reunion (ben)
No changes made.